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Wednesday, 30 September 2009
1st Script
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Using All Our Ideas, pitch and feeback we produced the first script idead for our short film.
Pitch 3 And Feedback
This is our 3rd and final pitch which we gave to our class and revieved feeback in order to improve our idea. We found that this idea as much better than the other two and there was only a few little issues whihc we had to solve before proceeding.
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Reasearch 2 - Analysis of Short Films
http://www.bbc.co.uk/filmnetwork/films/p004rgd1
Round by Kirk Hendry
This film uses hands to illustrate an entire world. It uses a hand as a seed and through the hand a world is created with animals, trees etc. This has a very child friendly feel and corresponds to the type of audience in which we would like to target our film at. I feel the appropriate use of music in certain area of the film get the audience excited and even though it is quite simplistic it is still interesting. The simplistic feel created by the hands is lost as we watch as this world of hands becomes real to us over the duration of the film; I feel this sort of feel could be used in our production also.
Genie in My Nostrils
This is an low quality, amataur, comedy spoof which illustrates simply some of the effects in which we can reproduce with regards to our genie character. It Used a fade to white and an electrical sound effect to show that the genie was appearing which we could use this but i think it would be more effective if we made it slower and found 'mystical' music to match the action which could make it more dramatic.
Round by Kirk Hendry
This film uses hands to illustrate an entire world. It uses a hand as a seed and through the hand a world is created with animals, trees etc. This has a very child friendly feel and corresponds to the type of audience in which we would like to target our film at. I feel the appropriate use of music in certain area of the film get the audience excited and even though it is quite simplistic it is still interesting. The simplistic feel created by the hands is lost as we watch as this world of hands becomes real to us over the duration of the film; I feel this sort of feel could be used in our production also.
Genie in My Nostrils
This is an low quality, amataur, comedy spoof which illustrates simply some of the effects in which we can reproduce with regards to our genie character. It Used a fade to white and an electrical sound effect to show that the genie was appearing which we could use this but i think it would be more effective if we made it slower and found 'mystical' music to match the action which could make it more dramatic.
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